I really like the direction you are going in here. i think your concept gets across very well. Nice series. My eye goes to the ones with more contrast- as it always does. Some of the areas are not especially reading as shattered mirror? if that is important to you. the second one from the bottom integrates the mirror best as composition so far.
About the only thing i might suggest is the rhetorical question, does the focal point merit the attention.
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ReplyDeleteI really like the direction you are going in here. i think your concept gets across very well. Nice series.
My eye goes to the ones with more contrast- as it always does. Some of the areas are not especially reading as shattered mirror? if that is important to you. the second one from the bottom integrates the mirror best as composition so far.
About the only thing i might suggest is the rhetorical question, does the focal point merit the attention.
nice starts, great ideas, good series.
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I love how you mixed the scanned images together. You have created some beautiful pieces. The texture of the paper adds so much to each one as well.
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